Prompt 089

May 5, 2009. Rho’s townhouse. 1918 hrs.

“Why are all the streetlights out? Why’s it so dark here? What’s all that noise? Why do I have to wear this pullover? Why-”

“Oh my God kid! Do you ever stop asking questions?”

“My mom says when you stop asking questions that’s when you get com…compl…complacent. Com-pla-cency breeds as false feeling of safety which leads to sorrow.”

“What the hell kind of thing is that to teach a kid?” Nolan muttered as he locked up behind them. This wasn’t the safest neighborhood. In fact, it looked as if Rho had invested in one of the last good homes on the block.

Julius shrugged as he scratched at his side. “Mom said I gotta be prepared for everything because anything could happen.”

“Your mom sounds like a nut job.”

“D-don’t talk about my mom Nolan.”

Nolan raised an eyebrow at the thread of steel that had entered the kid’s voice. “Fair enough. What about your dad? Can I talk about him?”

The kid shrugged. “Everyone talks about my dad.”

“Not very high up in the pack is he?”

“Nolan?”

“Yeah?”

“You could never hurt a kid right?”

“No, that’s just chicken shit.”

“And Caine? Do you think-”

“Look kid, Caine’s had a rough life. The last thing I think he’d do is hurt a defenseless kid. It’s not in any decent Lycan’s DNA.”

“Okay. It’s almost dark. Are we gonna reach his house before then?”

A cat hissed at them from amid the garbage. Nolan let out a rumbling growl causing the cat to scamper away. He looked down at the kid and smiled. “No worries kiddo. I got your back.” Nolan’s steps faltered when the kid’s small hand slipped into his.

“Okay then. Let’s do this.” He straightened his bony shoulders and Nolan allowed himself to be tugged forward.

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Safehouse. Same day. 1845hrs

“Clothes! Clean, clean, clean clothes!” Alana sang underneath of her breath as she opened closet after closet. This Rho character had to have at least four closets full of clothes. Not to mention the dressers. Alana whipped out a frothy looking dress and pressing it to her body danced around the room. Most of the clothes still had tags on them. It was wonderful! Wonderful! And shoes! Lord bless the man!

Putting the dress back up Alana took a shirt and a pair of shorts off a hanger. She had washed the outfit yesterday in preparation for today. Slipping it on she sighed in contentment before bending down and fastening her shoes.

She looked good. She wasn’t one to usually studied herself in the mirror but…

“I look good!” The haircut was slowly growing on her and the shoes made her legs look fantastic. But it was highly unlikely that she’d be able to run in them, she thought absently then froze. The reality of what she just thought sank in. Having to run at a drop of a hat was her reality now. No ifs, ands or buts. Giving the shoes one last, wistful look she toed them off and rummaged around for a pair of flats.

When she walked into the living room she noticed that Caine wasn’t even paying attention to what was happening on the big screen in front of him. He was staring out the window at the slowly darkening sky. Grabbing the remote, she was surprised he wasn’t holding it in his hand, she clicked off the TV. He didn’t move.

“Caine?”

“Have a seat Alana,” he said evenly. Frowning at the back of his head she walked around to the other side of the couch and gingerly sat down. He turned his head to look at her and she drew up her legs at the serious expression on his face.

“What is it Caine? Nothing could be worse than what I’ve already been through.” He grimaced and she shook her head. “That’s not-”

“No, you’re right.” Sighing, he slid down to the floor and idly began to pick at the carpet.

“How much do you know about wolf hierarchy?”

“Well, I know you have the alpha pair, the beta pair right behind the alphas and various other pack mates. Adult and juvenile. Then you have the omega who is the lowest ranking wolf. Pretty much the geeky kid in a room full of athletes.”

She looked down to see Caine with a grin on his face. “What?”

“You. Your brain is amazing to me. Anyways,” he said as her chin tilted proudly. “So, you know that thing that I said to Franklin? About you being mine?”

“Uh huh.”

He waved his hand and raised his eyebrows. She shook her head. He nodded back at her.

“You don’t even know me.”

“Doesn’t matter.”

“It does matter to a normal person!”

He stared at her then slowly got up from the floor.

“What are you doing?”

“I don’t like the look in your eyes. ”

“Sooo…you’re gonna what? Run? That’s only going to make me want to chase you down.”

Alana watched as he rolled his shoulders almost if he were preparing to run. “Look Caine. I don’t really know you. Just because we’ve been thrust together the last few months doesn’t mean anything.”

“True.”

She relaxed slightly only to tense up at his next words.

“Still doesn’t change the fact that you’re my mate. Do you really think I’d just let you walk away?”

“You sound like a crazed stalker. Aren’t you Lycans-”

“You’re a Lycan too.”

“-Rational human beings as well?”

“Sure.  When we want to be.”

Alana stepped down from the couch and they stared at each other. Sucking in a deep breath she darted to the right. She heard Caine’s boots hitting the floor behind her.

It wasn’t long before Caine had her backed up against the door.  She flinched when he reached out only for her breath to catch when he tilted her chin upward to look at him.

“I’d never intentionally hurt you, you know that right? I should have left you alone but I couldn’t. Not even from the start. Can you really say that you don’t feel anything?”

“I don’t feel anything.” The lie seemed to burn her throat. Caine’s laugh brought her eyes back to him.

“You’re such a fucking liar. But that’s okay. I know you’re scared.”

She slapped his hand away from her face. “Oh yeah, reverse psychology is really going to work.”

Caine’s arm wrapped around her waist and his free hand cupped the back of her head. “I can smell it. The fear…the arousal. If you want me to kiss you ask for it.”

“You’re annoying.”

“Ask.”

“Why you think anyone would want to kiss you is beyond me. You’re rude, I think  you’re slightly crazy and-”

“You know you want to ask.”

Her arms rose. She wanted him to kiss her. She’d studied his mouth while he slept. Wondered at the feel, the warmth.

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When will they just KISS ALREADY? I know right! Blah!Razz New layout is new.  Not sure if I like it yet(haven’t figured out a way to turn off the hover picture thing) so yeah…Alana and Caine got mini-makeovers. Nothing drastic. I just stripped the makeup from her face, added rensims nose masks(when I made her I didn’t have that in my downloads!) and gave her ASK’s lips, added some eyebags and stuck some lashes on her. Caine just got the lips and the nose masks. And how come I didn’t realize how big his nose was until now? LOL!

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  1. Van says:

    Nolan and Julius, ruining moments since May 2009 Razz

    I love Rho’s safe house, I must say–and Alana obviously does too, with all those closets. And the seven beds? I’m tempted to think he was suspecting they would wear a few out Razz

    Awww, Julius is so cute! I hope he finds his mom again soon…

    Hey, I can’t remember, does Nolan have a mate? Because it would be kind of funny if he hooked up with Dom (and then he’d be stepdaddy to Julius, and that would be awesome).

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LOL!! Yeah, I know! I have to wonder if this is Nolan getting back at Caine for being all pissy! Hahaha! No better way to do it! Although I’m sure Caine knows that Nolan is out there!

    I ♥ the safe house too! Simsurbania is awesome! It’s supposed to be apartments but I kept it residential and just decorated it as I went! I actually had fun doing it too!Smile I actually did place a number of beds in there for…whoever! Haha! I might have went overboard!Razz Rho probably HOPES they will! Calm Caine down a bit!

    Julius is adorable! He has this weird voice in my head that just makes me grin when writing him!

    Nope! Nolan is mate free. He WANTS a mate though. Hmm…I kinda have someone else in mind but I don’t know since neither Nolan or Dom or the other person have met yet sooo…we shall see!Razz

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  2. Azzy says:

    I think i am gonna make my own Nolan fanclub Wink

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    WOOT!!! I love some Nolan too! Grin

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  3. S.B. says:

    AGGHHHH! Go outside and play, Nolan!!

    I adore Nolan. And I felt so bad for Julius, asking about whether he would hurt a kid. What a mess that poor baby has had to deal with.

    Laughed so hard at Caine’s little monologue in the mirror! He could try poetry LOL!!! And Alana needs to spend some time thinking about things too. It has been MONTHS, not days. She cannot realistically claim they don’t know each other.

    This was wonderful! The tension between Caine and Alana, the sorrow Julius has had to contend with, and the comedy, fantastic combination!

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LMAO!!! LMAO!! I’m pretty sure Caine is thinking the same thing! Or something a little more violent!

    I love Nolan too!Grin He’s awesome! And I feel for Julius! His dad really jerked him around so he’s leery of pretty much any male! But he’s a kid so he bounces back pretty quick! He’s shown that!

    Haha! I was writing it and all these little random bits kept floating in my head so I used them! To Alana knowing someone is knowing their favorite color or food. Knowing tiny, intimate details within a ‘normal’ relationship. But their relationship has never been normal. It’s not ever going to be normal!

    Thanks Beth!Grin

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  4. Mao says:

    The hover thingy should be removable on the main stylesheet. Just search “img”–it’ll either be like the post img or overall img class. Bah. I hate when they do that, LOL!

    Ahhh, Alana and Caine… these two are such a mess, but they’re getting better. However! I will say I’m actually GLAD Nolan interrupted them. I think they both need a bit more time. Caine has admitted its predominantly instinct, but what does he feel? And Alana, too. Jumping into this for physical need won’t get them anywhere.

    LOL at Caine’s mirror talk. That was hilarious!

    Poor Julius. They’re going to find out, whether he tells them or not. I wonder what they’ll do. Frown

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Gah! I hate it too! Not all the time but for this particular theme he made it WAY too dark/light! I’ll fiddle around with it. I took out a bit of the coding and it didn’t change anything so I’ll dig a little deeper!

    Exactly! They do need a little more time, especially Caine I think. He doesn’t want mess anything up but like you said…which is interesting because I was going to add that but I was already over the word count for the prompt! *cough* They each need to step back. Julius will be a great buffer for that!Smile

    Thanks Mao! Haha! I had a little giggle at it when I reread it! LMAO!

    Yeah man! Julius…he’s a little alpha in the making but he doesn’t stand a chance against an angry adult Lycan who can change into something else! Shout *sigh* Next prompt will deal with Rho so it’ll be a wait so I can gather some ideas!Razz

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  5. Kayvon says:

    Yay! I am so glad you mentioned the changes you made at the end because I was all like “Is is me or do these pics look extra spectacular?” I knew it wasn’t me Smile Amazing how some subtle changes improve on what I thought was already lycan tale perfection anyway!

    Oh how you keep us hanging on – that and the fact that kids will ALWAYS completely mess up grown folks groove! It never fails if you don’t have kids yourself now the laws of physics must state somewhere that if an adult attempts to touch another adult within 100 miles of a kid their internal monitor sends them into emergency” I- must- locate- that- adult-right-and stop-the-groovin’-from-happening- now” mode. Even though Caine made that call they arrived at just the right time to squash all the good stuff and I say its all a C-O-Nspiracy!!!

    Okay Im back from the madness. As you can tell I can relate. Its sad I know. Wink Absolutely loved this update and you have me pining for the next time Alana and Caine almostbutnotreallytouchandkiss because something is always around the corner. I love it! Grin

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LOL! Yeah, I didn’t want to do drastic changes that had people wondering who in the heck it was but something a little different…especially since I took everything off when I took off the blood/bruises. Awww…thanks!Smile These pictures were a pain! I had some major clipping going on with some images so I had to keep reshooting from different angles. Glad that you liked them!Grin

    LMAO!! I always do! Oh goodness!! Don’t have kids but friends and family are always telling me the same thing! I think that’s hilarious! Probably because it HASN’T happened to me! LMAO! Your comments always crack me up!

    THANK YOU!!!Grin One of these days those two will have an uninterrupted romantic moment. One day….

    Wink

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  6. goodbye_sun says:

    I’m just going to repeat everyone else and say just how lovely Nolan is with Julius, he makes a great father/uncle figure. I can even forgive their bad timing. Or good timing, depending on who you ask Razz

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Oh man! I think Nolan would have a fit if he knew everyone thought he was a good father/uncle figure! LMAO!!

    To everyone else it’ll be good timing. To Caine…yeah…not so much! LOL!! Razz

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  7. thelook. says:

    Whopee! Lycan Tales has enetered the new year – and with a very will-you-just-kiss-already? start! Wink I like the layout (when I um.. *cough* checked your page the other days.. did I say days? I meant day Laugh the banner kept on changing so then I suspected a new layout would come along and BAM there it was) but I started wondering why the pictures where so dark – ’til I realised the hover thing ma-bob.

    Nolan = awesome dad. Tenchnically isn’t he the father figur- WHAT IF HE AND DOM GOT TOGETHER AND HE IS SECRETLY JULIUS’ DAD? I think I’m hallucinaing now but shock thought Confused Julius nooo, please say you need to like get fresh air or something or scare a cat just so Alana and Caine get their kiss. PLEASE? Caine’s speech in the bathroom Razz And ‘Alana misses the pup’. He’s one big marshmallow. Alana’s back and maybe her germophobia is going? And in it’s place is a deep desire fo- OK I’m officially going to stop there. Wink

    Great pictures as always AND (when will I shut up?) I second a Nolan fan club Grin x

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LOL! Thanks thelook! Thanks!Smile I wanted something simple! And everyone knows that I don’t stay with layouts for any length of time…for whatever reason. I might do some tweaking to it here or there but I’m liking it alot so far! And I fixed the hover thing! Thank goodness! It was annoying me! Really Angry LOL @ days! Razz

    OMG!!! Where did you GET that!! LMAO!!! No, I can say, with a total certainty, that Nolan and Dom never, EVER hooked up! Dom is older than she looks. Nolan is around Caine’s age, possibly a few years older. Not saying that Dom couldn’t be a ‘cougar’ (is that the right term now?) but nope!

    Ohh….just had an idea for the prompt after next! *does happy jig* Caine is a HUGE marshmallow but he tries to be hardcore! As for Alana and her germophobia? Only time will tell!Razz Bwahahaha!! I love all the theories!

    Thank you!Grin I’m really glad you enjoyed it! Nolan would so love his fan club! LMAO!

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    thelook Reply:

    *gasp* The layout. OMG. Red is so Caine’s colour Cool

    I do not know where that came from but it would be a weirdly great twist Razz . But then Dom’s not the type of person that would really suit Nolan. Maybe she would like knock him out for touching Julius but to go there.. hmm.. Nolan’s older than Caine? Aww, a younger Nolan looking at like a baby Caine and thinking ‘This is my leader?’ Grin

    PROMPT AFTER THE NEXT? Cry I’d write a story, but then I don’t think it’d be as kick-ass as all the others I’ve read. Or the ideas that good Nerd

    Caine and marshmallows – mm i want a campfire now. Grin Alana’s germophobia has definetly gone. I think. But after all if a girl has a closet full of shoes I don’t blame her. But I love flats Razz

    Flats forever. Mad Razz

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Haha! Thanks!Smile There were three other colors but I thought this was the better of them!Grin

    Nah, I don’t think they’re each other types at all. She’d want to rip out his throat if she thought he’d hurt Julius but as far as relationships? Plus I don’t think Dom is read to get back into the dating game just yet! Yep! Pretty much everyone is older than Caine. And it’s not like everyone is going to be submissive. He has to show he’s the right leader for the job…

    Haha! Yeah! Next prompt has to do with Rho…speaking of which I need to build that set! Gah! Ohh…you should write! It’s good times! And you never know how it’ll be until you put it out there!Smile

    I had some marshmallows last night! YUM!!! Nope…it hasn’t gone. It’s just not as pronounced as it once was. Besides, Rho keeps a clean house so she has nothing to stress about! Yet…bwahaha!!

    ME TOO!!!! Those shoes I had her in would have KILLED me! Grin

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    thelook Reply:

    Website makers can be so devious! It’s always the option of 3 colours or you get that ONE design that looks great but your just not digging the colour so much Curse

    But what would Dom do if she found out Nolan was really finding her happiness? Well, he doesn’t really know but it’s still true ROTFL LMAO at the thought of Dom going speed dating:
    Random guy: ‘So.. what’s your job?’
    Dom: *Death stare*

    Rho Heart I call him Mr Poetic because he’s just so nice Grin
    Building a set… if I write a Sims story I need to build… *blank expression* Shout I’m so googling this before I write my story. (I cannot build houses! At all! Even adding a carpet is a task for me! I’m lazy that way Evil Grin )

    Mmm the gooey goodness, the springy touch.. Silly IT HASN’T GONE? But then Rho’s house is as clean as a baby’s butt before the whole ‘I’m going to soil my pants and not tell anyone ‘cept my self about it!’ thing Cool

    THANK GOODNESS! Someone who likes flats! Everyone I know is a heels junkie! Razz Heels and I – we just don’t click. Big Frown (BUT the shoes Alana chose were quite nice)

    And about the whole instinct thing – I don’t think it’s instinct. They love each other. IT’S OBVIOUS! SHE STUDIES HIS LIPS AT NIGHT. He umm.. gets ‘excited’ over being close to her Disdain That is love. Misunderstood Lycan love. Angel

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LOL! So true! I know a little bit about CSS to change the colors and such but that’s about it! Frown

    Dom, I think, would want a true Alpha and she’d have to leave town for that. Especially considering everyone pretty much hates her because of what she did to Bernard and what she did for Ethan. LMAO @ her speed dating!

    RHO!! I love him! He’s such a sweetie…well most of the time! *whistles innocently* I don’t really set build! Haha! I have a few pics that s how you exactly what I do. It’s pretty much walls and whatever decorations that I need and the right camera angles!Razz For the longest time I just downloaded houses but I’ve started to build my own!

    Ha! You’re making me want marshmallows now! Heh She never flipped out before she went with Caine because her house was always clean and Rho’s house is clean as well. Sooo…but I don’t think it’s fully gone. Don’t know if it ever will be!

    FLATS FOR THE WIN!!! I don’t get along with heels either! And I adore those shoes that Alana had on before but I know I’d break my neck!

    LMAO!! LMAO!!! Maybe…maybe not!!Razz

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    thelook Reply:

    CSS? I’m lost – what does that stand for? lmao, when it comes to abbreviations I am so not the person for it.

    Ethan (that ass, sorry for my English Razz) will never be a true Alpha so what the heck attracted him to her? Even his son is more of a man than him. -.-

    Rho equally needs a fan club as much as Nolan Cool Gah, I must see those pictures then! Who knew a fictional characters life would be so demanding? *cough* Download houses? I still live in MAXIS houses. (I saw the house you built on another story! Can you say n-i-c-e? But I’m yet to read it -.- Stupid time flies by when you are having fun rule!) I’ve only downloaded hair and some skins really Razz Oohs, and makeup – Sims aren’t the least photogenic ‘people’ but I mean you need to look your best if someone is going to photograph you! Cool

    I want cheesecake now! Or marshmallow and chocolate brownies! Yummies :’] Aha, she could always go on Maury and talk about her experience with germs. Or way worse – JERRY SPRINGER :0 (If it even exists anymore).

    FLATS, OH YEAH Razz I saw these reaally nice pair of boots and I just looked at that killer inch and knew I’d be a goner Frown

    On top of that, you know the whole Lycan thing I’ve got confused somehow. Are they like us human beings and how some of us are related and others aren’t so it’s okay if Caine and Alana get together.. ?

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    CSS=Cascading Style Sheet which is the place where you make edits to the layout and things!Smile

    Because she thought he would be. He puts on a good front but when he comes down to it he leans on too many people to protect him instead of doing that himself! And so true! Julius is made of win!Grin

    Rho, Rho, Rho!!! I’ll try to upload some a little later if I get the time. All they are are three or four squares shoved together! Haha! Oh! Thank you!Grin I’m slowly learning new stuff! No worries! It’s not going anywhere! I’m a downloading fiend! I have a little something of everything!

    She needs to talk to Dr. Phil! Oh god! That would be BORING!

    Yeah, it’s like humans! Some of them are related and some aren’t. It’s totally cool if Alana and Caine hook up!Grin Maybe…we still haven’t heard about her dad! *shifty eyes* Confused

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    thelook Reply:

    Ohh, you see this is why God made dictionaries Razz

    I feel like smacking Dom on the head now! Just because she thought he could do it doesn’t necessarily mean he will – and ditto on the leaning on others; I mean getting someone else to do your dirty work? NOT going to work. Woop, go Julius!

    A cheer for Rho too! And this is why we have internet too! For helpful pictures on story making – thanks Smile It’s nice knowing everything’s in order and won’t go missing. Unlike my bedroom <3

    Dr.Phil just yells at people. Like flippin' heck your meant to CARE about their problems too. [I watched it once and never went back]

    The thought of knowing Alana's dad could come makes me think something's gonna go wrong.. x(
    But happily ever middles don't exist. Even Cinderella had to lie before she got the glass shoeThinking

    thelook Reply:

    OMG I just realised it’s like 7.30pm here in England! And in America it’s like 2. Wow ROTFL I knew there was time change but I didn’t think about it.

    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LOL!! This is true! I have a dictionary by me at all times! And thank goodness for Firefox and their spelling checking as you write! Trust me!Razz

    Most of the time I feel like smacking Dom! And then I just want to hug her too! SOOO torn!! Blah!

    I know! Rho needs a big hug!!Grin Amen for the internet! Plus there are communities that will help you find anything that you’re looking for! Thank goodness!

    Yeah, I don’t like Dr. Phil. He irritates me! Blah! As for Alana’s dad…I haven’t decided if he should actually join the cast or just be a flashback or something! *taps chin* That is SO freakin’ true! I’ll have to remember that one!

    Ah! You live in the UK!? That’s awesome! I want to go there so bad! And is there really that big a time difference? WOW! is right!Razz Sorry it took me a minute to get back to you! Just came back from the sis’s house! Good times, good times!

    thelook Reply:

    I use Microsoft Word’s dictionary Grin And Google Chrome’s – but WTF Google isn’t counted as a word? But it’s their dictionary..

    Dom needs some TLC ;] And yes Rho too! But if they got together that’d be weird.. like super fly weird.

    The people that make those communities are great! Without them I wouldn’t be able to do a lot of things.

    Maybe both? A flashback of Alana’s past maybe.. and then TA-DAH he arrives! Or maybe he comes through in spirit…

    Shock I want to go to America so bad! Meh, you were having a good time, I don’t mind Smile

  8. Qui says:

    That last part was a little intense! even I wanted him to kiss her! i swear i love their relationship! Only if Nolan had come just 10 seconds later! well.. there is always the next prompt Smile

    Great Job!

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Haha!! Thanks!Smile I’m glad that came across! I wanted him to kiss her! LMAO!! I ♥ their relationship so hard! Wait…should I have said that?Razz 10 seconds…two hours…Razz

    True, true! Thanks! Hey! I tried to comment on your new story but you have comments disabled or something!Frown

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    Qui Reply:

    awwww. i didn’t know that! thanks for telling me! going to fix it now Smile

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    It’s fixed! YAY!Grin

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  9. Yuxi says:

    Good gods, Rho’s house is amazing – clothes and beds and huge television screens, damn. And Caine, you shameless git! That’s not the way you talk to a lady. XD
    ‘He cleared his throat. “‘Yo, what I’m sayin’ is you’re my girl! Ya feel me?’ What the hell?’
    ^
    That made me LOL quite hard.

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    It was actually built to be an apartment but when I downloaded it from Simurbania and got it in game I thought why the heck not make it a HUGE loft type place?Razz

    LMAO! Caine is…well Caine is one of a kind I think! Haha! Thanks Yuxi!Grin

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  10. s@ndy says:

    Shock gosh!!!!! What!!! They didn’t kiss!!! Gosh… and Julius didn’t talk to Caine either!!

    Caine talking in front of the mirror was hilarious!!! lol
    I do think they both feel more than a simple attraction… but are really scared to accept it, it is easieir to say, “you are my mate cause thats the way it is”, than “you are my mate cause I love you and you love me’ Grin
    They both are stubborn and so different from each other but it is obvious they are meant to be… so give them some time to accept and embrace who they are, and whom they have become…

    and hurry up with next chapter Grin lol (just kidding) take your time, I still need to catch up with all the other stories Grin lol
    Wonderful chapter as always!!!

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LMAO Sandy! I know! I’m horrible! For shame!Razz

    I love CaineI He never fails to crack me up! I think they do too but they are too scared like you said…and too hard headed to see anything that’s not RIGHT in front of them! *Shakes head*

    LOL!! I’m going to start working on the next chapter soon! I promise!Razz Thanks Sandy! I appreciate it!

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  11. Freestar says:

    Julius is just too cute. My hear bleeds when kids have to grow up too fast. I love how he defended his mom…awww I want a son. And when he slipped his hand into Nolan’s…sniff, sniff.

    Kiss her, kiss her, kiss her….giggle.

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  12. PhoenixFG says:

    He is adorable! And yeah, he’s had to group up WAY too fast. Hopefully he retains some of his innocence. *crosses fingers that he does*

    He’s very protective of his mom. Someone has to be. LOL! Have a another baby!! YAY!! I’ll tell mom!Razz

    I know! Do it already right?! High Five!

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  13. cheripye says:

    LOL! I cant believe that he’s thinking about the fire extinguisher again LOL! and yes just how will she react to him telling her that??? LMAO I love his mirror practice!!!and AWWW I love the conversation continuance Yep Caine’s a big softy LOL!

    The cat hiss, was perfect I love how you incorporate the little things into your story telling LOL! and Man Jule’s really does ask alot of questions But you portrayed his intelligence and age masterfully. 80)

    Clothes LOL! and shoes what a depressing thought that you couldnt wear the shoes you really wanted to! I would die if I couldnt wear my heels again. LMAO standing on the couch not liking the look in his eyes. LOL!

    DANGIT!!! I really wanted to see them kiss!!! You left it so hanging PHOENIX!!!

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    I’m pretty sure he’s going to be bringing that incident up for years to come!Razz Caine in the mirror talking cracked me up as I was writing it! He’s hilarious!

    Thank you!!Grin That was a random cat that walked by so I grabbed it and placed it just so to add to the story!Smile Julius is ALWAYS asking questions! Just like a puppy who pokes his nose in everything!

    Alana loves her clothes! And I’m a flats girl myself so the reverse is true for me!

    SORRY!!!!!Razz It’ll happen! Soon…ish!

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  14. valpre says:

    Oh my…if I were Alana I would have begged for that kiss already. That woman is strong!

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LMAO!!! Hahaha! I know! Especially with Caine looking so fine! Seriously!

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