Comments on: Prompt 088

By: PhoenixFG

PhoenixFG — Sun, 03 Jan 2010 05:41:55 +0000

A mess indeed! LOL! Although Alana being Alana should have done some research on the internet!

Caine was not amused! Hahaha! But it was cute!

By: Mao

Mao — Sat, 02 Jan 2010 17:15:42 +0000

LOL, I am loving this dog charade! It is just too amusing. Poor Alana, though. When she finds out it’s really that crazy Caine, she’s going to be in for it. What a mess that will be.

Seeing Caine in the doggy bed was kind of cute.

By: Phoenix

Phoenix — Tue, 03 Mar 2009 21:08:00 +0000

Hey Emily! I like the new layout for your short stories blog! Very fresh!

They are a pair aren’t they? I think both of them are in for a surprise. How they handle things well…that’s what makes them Caine and Alana!

Alana does have some great qualities about her. She’s just a little naive for her own good…most of the time anyways!

No, no it’s not wrong! I think it’s sexy too! ~

Thanks Emily! I appreciate! Can’t wait for your new stories!

By: Emily

Emily — Tue, 03 Mar 2009 18:14:00 +0000

Oh could their situation get any more unique? She likes the “dog” but hates the man, he doesn’t like her either way but seems to lose control when he’s in wolf form, wonder how she will feel when she finds out he is the dog. IF she finds out, lol! Love that line about him saying she thinks he’s a “dog”, how rude-he’s a wolf, duh!

I love Alana’s character too, showing her at school, she’s really got some great qualities about her.

And is it wrong that I think that whole thing about him being able to pick out her smell is a bit sexy? Oh well, maybe I’m a weirdo!

Great update as always, love this story!

By: Phoenix

Phoenix — Mon, 02 Mar 2009 22:30:00 +0000

LOL Beth! Yes, she did but...but that was all kinds of wrong!

Caine doesn't know what all his reactions mean. And as for him holding back...if it had been anyone else but Alana they would have been dead.

*hums to herself* I can't tell you! Haha!

Thanks Beth! That means a lot!

By: Phoenix

Phoenix — Mon, 02 Mar 2009 22:28:00 +0000

Thanks Karen!

Yes, she does but Caine is stubborn! Even if something stares him in the face he’ll reject it!

Describing his boredom was fun! Haha!! Some of the poses are a pain but otherwise I’m having fun! It’s different from posing Sims for sure!

By: S.B.

S.B. — Mon, 02 Mar 2009 18:31:00 +0000

She drugged him...now that was just plain.. ok she meant well.

I love the way Caine is reacting to her! And also loved the fact that he held back, controlled himself, although he was justifiably angry and scared.

so she doesn't turn into a werewolf. What then? A werecat? Just a nice happy girl dog? LOL! fascinating!

Your writing is just fantastic! Every shot -- perfect!

By: ~Drew

~Drew — Mon, 02 Mar 2009 17:45:00 +0000

Another great installment. Just love how you are building this between the two of them.
Alana has a lot of endearing qualities that appeal to Caine, even though he is not entirely aware of it yet.
Love how you described his boredom, well done!!

Getting the dog to pose must be a pain, LOL! Great work mate!

By: Phoenix

Phoenix — Mon, 02 Mar 2009 03:56:00 +0000

It wasn’t a bite…just kind of a scrape! And…not a werewolf exactly!

Thanks Sandy! Yes, he is bored. He can’t go out because his face is plastered on the TV and milk cartons. And he should be doing all those things but Caine…is Caine! Haha!

She is sweet! Dense but sweet! She’ll be better than okay!

By: S@ndy

S@ndy — Sun, 01 Mar 2009 22:17:00 +0000

He bit her!!! what if she turns into a werewolf ? lol

Great update lol
And the part with the rat, lol poor Caine, it must be really boring to be there all by himself… I think he should be working out, exercising or something, he needs to get in shape to kill Ethan!!! He needs to go into bootcamp mode!! lol

poor Alana, she is just the sweetest girl out there, I really hope she will be ok after the bite!

Great update!