Prompt 073

“No, you haven’t interrupted anything. We were just finishing up.”

The blonde woman gave her a small smile. Alana noticed that it didn’t reach her eyes.

“That’s good,” she said without breaking eye contact. The woman strolled forward.

“Oh, I’m sure it will be when I see him later tonight.”

“What is Alana doing outside the apartment?” Caine snapped as Nolan came toward him.

“She said she wanted to talk to you man. I met her as I was coming back to the apartment. Who was that?”

“Her name is Victoria. And she’s-”

“A vampyre. Yeah, I got that vibe. Don’t usually see them on this side of town. How the fuck did they know about you?”

“Good question. How does everyone keep finding me?” Caine rubbed his forehead before he looked down at the wiggling bundle in Nolan’s hands.

“What have you got there?”

“A pup.”

“One of ours?”

Nolan bit back his grin. He didn’t even think that Caine realized how quickly he had fallen in as a member of the pack. “I don’t think so. Word would have gotten to Greg if one of ours was missing.”

“How many packs live within a hundred mile radius?”

“Four. But only two that are loyal to Ethan.”

“Maybe someone should contact them to see if a pup has gone missing. Since when are pups able to fully transform like this?”

“Only our pack I thought. I’ll have Greg put out feelers.”

“Thanks.”

The pup continued to wiggle until Nolan set him down then he promptly raced over to Caine, tripping over his feet in the process. Laughing, Caine bent down and picked him.

“Dude, if you two are going to go at it I insist on breaking out the body oil,” Nolan said as the squeezed past Victoria to shove quarters into the pinball machine. Victoria glared at him.

“Mutt. He’s even worse than Ulrich.”

“Don’t talk about him,” Alana snapped. The woman slowly turned her head to look at her. They stared at each other in silence for several moments.

Alana’s skin began to crawl and it felt as if her bones were stretching and starting to shift.

“Oh! Have I upset the poor female Lycan? Dear, dear. I apologize. Don’t bite off more than you can chew half-breed,” she hissed under her breath as she brushed past her.

“Something, or someone, just might bit back.”

The door closed behind her and Alana turned to watch her walk down the sidewalk. As if she felt her eyes on her the woman turned, winked and gave a broad grin before she turned and walked away.

Alana blinked. And then she  blinked again. She did not just see fangs. She didn’t!

Caine hid a grin as he bent to put the puppy down. Alana probably didn’t know it but she just won her first pissing contest.

“Who do you belong to pup and what are you doing on this side of town?” he whispered as he petted its head. It licked his fingers. “And why won’t you change back?”

He stood with a sigh. The last thing he needed was another complication but it looked as if he had one. And another one was coming right toward him.

“Hold the phone! No one said anything about vampires.”

“That’s vampryes. With a Y.”

“I don’t care if it was vampires with an A, E, I, O or U. We didn’t talk about that.”

“Alana…if Lycans exist why would you think vampyres didn’t?”

“I-I don’t know. She was walking during the day though!”

“She’s pretty old school.  Has to be a few centuries old.”

“A few…a few centuries old?”

“Uh huh.”

“Oh well I’m happy you’re taking this so well. Next you’re going to tell me Nessie exists!”

Caine frowned. “Who’s Nessie?”

“The Loch Ness monster!”

“Oh. ” He rolled his eyes. “Of course the Loch Ness monster doesn’t exist.”

She stared at him for a moment before she buried her face in her hands. “I think I’m having a nervous breakdown.”

Caine stared at her with a horrified look on his face before he stepped forward and awkwardly wrapped his arms around her.

“There, there,” he said patting her on the back.

“There, there?” She gave a watery laugh as she leaned her forehead against his shoulder.

“That’s the best I got.”

“Haven’t done this very often have you?”

“If, by this, you mean comforting a woman fuck no.”

She laughed again and he slowly rested his cheek against her head. “I hate to break the mood but I gotta ask.”

She stiffened against him. “Ask what?”

“Are we having a moment?”

There was a heartbeat of silence and then she leaned back to look up at him. “Yes. Yes, I think we are.”

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32 Comments

  1. Van says:

    Poor Alana. Too much too fast, eh? Information overload. Exploding mind syndrome. *sigh*

    “Are we having a moment?” Heeehee *dies*

    Seriously, though. So cute!

    BTW, I’m watching 50_shouts. Can’t wait for the first post Grin Who’s writing the first one?

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Yeah! Too much info going on there! She’s coming to terms with it(FINALLY) and then Victoria has to mess with her head! LOL!!

    I know! I was like ahhh! And it did feel so awkward. Who says there, there anymore? Seriously!!! LOL

    Cool!!!! Grin g_s is going first then it’s elecy, me and then dolly.

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  2. Meralgia says:

    Awww, they are *having a moment*. LOL And our pup is getting quite comfortable there.
    The first paragraph is my favourite, I love it how you wrote it.

    (hey, first page – you called Nolan ‘Greg’ twice xD)

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LOL!! I loved it! Seriously! Alana has to give a little! I mean come on! Give the poor guy a break! And yeah, he is! Grin

    Oh!! Thanks! Oops! Those two going back and forth(even if it was just in her head) is always fun to do!

    D’oh!! FIXED!!! *should not write when I should be sleeping* And I had Greg on the lot because Caine pulls the best faces with him! *slaps forehead*

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  3. Penelope says:

    *hehe* Silly Alana. Babies are silent because they’re not breathing.

    I love how Nolan’s just walking around, tossing someone’s kid to and fro. How can they tell that Jullius is a lycan and not just a puppy?

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Soooo….I had to goggle that. *is a geek* Apparently it’s common for babies born vaginally not to be born breathing. Not ALL of them though. And since the concept freaks me out I like Alana’s thinking better! LOL

    LOL!! It’s not a kid, it’s a pup. If it was a kid he’d freak out!(Even though he’d probably be great with kids!) Facial and body structure. The legs would have been a dead give away seeing as how wolves knees(or elbows depending) turn inward and their paws turn outward. And the unconscious sounds Julius were making was probably what drew Nolan.

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    Penelope Reply:

    Well you wouldn’t want them breathing in the womb- They’d drown in the abiotic fluids! Ew. But yeah, their noses are full of mucus… I didn’t know that babies were ever born breathing!

    Julius is unconscious?!?

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LOL!! See I’m never having kids I don’t have that worry! Yeah man! Some moms were like my kids came out breathing and some moms were freaking out(rightly so) because they weren’t breathing. Then I went to some nursing sites and the nurses were saying the same thing. And then to verify all that I called my gram(should have done THIS first) who used to be a nurse and worked with babies in the neonatal unit and she said it varies from baby to baby. Some are, some aren’t. *shrug* The whole process is just weird to me! Well…not the WHOLE process!! Wink

    Haha!! As in like the sounds he didn’t realize he was making. I probably should have said: The sounds he was unconsciously making. I imagine it was probably little whimpers and yips and he was sniffing down the sidewalk getting sensory overload. He’s not used to being in that body. Confused

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  4. goodbye_sun says:

    Its not getting any easier for Alana, and even if she isn’t coping all that well she at least knows they aren’t lying to her, so its a start.

    Julius gets more awws for being so cute and for trying to let them know its him when they said his name Grin

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    No, it’s not. Just when she’s getting ready to deal with her reality some else comes along and punches her in the gut! LOL!

    I ♥ Julius! Haha! He’s just adorable in either form but I gotta admit I’m partial to the pup!

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  5. S.B. says:

    love the detail about Victoria’s lack of scent! Poor Alana, everything coming at her so fast and all of it is totally weird! Just love the way she connects with Caine – I have a feeling they’re going to have a lot more moments LOL!

    Great work and fantastic shots, as usual!

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Thanks. That little bit of info is going to come into play later I think!

    I know, I know! I thought it was time for her to face up to the fact that she couldn’t go back to her old way of life but then Victoria had to give her the evil eye when I was moving her so I tossed this bit in! LOL!

    MOAR moments! YES!!!!

    Thanks Beth! Right back at ya!

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  6. s@ndy says:

    Poor Alana!!! Grin lol
    I wonder if the little pup knows how to turn back!!! Grin Wonderful chapter, I’m really looking forward to more!!!
    Great job!

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LOL!! She never catches a break does she?Frown Haha!

    He knows how…he shouldn’t even be able to turn now but he won’t turn back because he wants to learn more about Caine.

    Thanks Sandy!! Grin

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  7. gayl says:

    Julius is so cute! I want to take him home with me! LOL at Alana and Victoria going at it. That would be an interesting fight wouldn’t it? And they had a moment…somehow I think there will be more of those soon.

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    He is adorable! I just want to cuddle him!! Oh man! That would be something! Victoria has a few years on her so she might take Alana down…maybe!

    YAY!!! I hope so! Smile

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  8. Freestar says:

    Come on…do it all ready.

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Shut your face you pervert!! LOL!!!

    Yeah, we talked about this! And we will probably take about it even more!

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  9. Nora says:

    Ha ha! Well, at least somethings better than nothing. Oh and FINALLY!!

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Ain’t that the truth Nora!? I know!!! So much has just been going on. Alana finally has some sure footing underneath of her…for the time being.Razz

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  10. QG says:

    that dialogue Alana-Caine is like serious oscarmoment. it will be rememberd along with lines like you had me at hello, i’m just a girl standing infront of a boy asking him to love her…*snifs away a tear* and Alana is a real smartass XD playing smoothly past Nolan, figuring stuff out. the Nessie joke XD I just love yr story Grin

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LOL!!! Those are some of my fav movie lines as well!!Razz

    Alana tries to play all nicey nice but we all know the deal!! Thanks QG!!!Grin

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  11. Ning says:

    Whoa! Alana was FIERCE! I almost couldn’t believe she could do that! XD

    Alana’s skin began to crawl and it felt as if her bones were stretching and starting to shift.

    Was she so angry that she was going to transform or something? Or was I reading too much into it? Razz

    And YAY!!! for Caine and Alana finally getting closer, lol! I’m glad that Alana is beginning to open up and willing to accept more things as facts. Things sure looks to be exciting in future! Grin

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LOL!! Yeah, I hadn’t really brought it up yet but she can. Glad you caught that Ning!Smile

    She was angry because it seemed as if Victoria was challenging her. Remember that Alana is now the female alpha…well sorta. So, we’ll see how that progresses.

    YAY!! I know! Haha!!! I figured I would cut them SOME sorta slack! Although technically it’s only been like two or three months since they’ve known each other. She will open up. She doesn’t have much choice.! Razz

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  12. cheripye says:

    hehehe Alana is still trying to convince herself it isnt real!

    Oh Geez, Nolan has a real way with words doesnt he, LOL!

    The worlds Greatest line

    “F… If I know. A woman’s mind is a scary place” I love it absolutely love it!!! and I am seriously seriously starting to think that tranquilizer might be a good thing. LOL!

    OOh so Vic is a Witch! staking her claim on an Alpha that isnt hers!

    ROFL!!! The oil!!! LMAO!!! ok I didnt think I could laugh harder but I am, asking if their having a moment!

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Yeah, but I think she finally coming around! She NEEDS to come around before I slap her! Gah!

    Nolan is the BEST EVER!!! Well, one of them!Razz

    Yeah, she’s a character! I couldn’t have all the snarky people be make!Razz

    Wink I had to awww at the moment but just those two had to make me laugh as well!

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  13. Emily says:

    Okay…soooo did not realize I was THIS far behind! LOL, as you can see I’ve had a lot of distractions lately! Grin

    LOL, are we having a moment? LMAO at his “comforting” skills! I loved the posing for that shot too, really realistic!

    It’s good that Alana is ready to face the facts and I was laughing so hard when Nolan was keeping her from going any further, too funny!

    Going to *try* to get caught up today, fingers crossed!

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    No worries! I have to catch up on the story that you just put out as well!Smile

    Thanks Emily! It was sorta by accident! She did one thing and I was like: “OH!!” and there ya go!Razz

    Nolan tries so hard to do the right thing by everyone. Hopefully it doesn’t cause him any harm!

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  14. Mao says:

    “I don’t care if it was vampires with an A, E, I, O or U. We didn’t talk about that.” Best line of the prompt, LOL! That is just great. xD

    Alana might want to watch herself, though. She’s barely used to the thought of being a werewolf… stepping up to a matured vampire probably is not very wise.

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LOL!!! I love the random stuff that just comes up when I’m writing!

    Yeah, no doubt. Sure there were other people there but I don’t think they’d move as fast as Victoria if they needed to! Big Frown

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  15. Sinclair says:

    Soo I just now realised that you’ve done like 10 chapters since I last read…I’m catching up now lol. So sorry.

    Butt Yay Alana!!! Put a bitch in her place!! Whoop! Even though I feel like she would have gotten her butt handed to her its still cool how quick she was ready to go at it. Vaseline and earrings taken out and all.

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    No worries!Razz I’m super sneaky! Plus I don’t do a lot of advertising anymore!

    Yeah, she would have! LOL! No doubt about that! *snicker* Vaseline and earrings! That had me snorting on my water! The visual!

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