Prompt 066

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Genre: Drama, suspense
Characters: Alana, Caine, Greg, The Shapeshifters
Prompt: 066~Rain
Word Count:2,120~ish
Rating: PG-13
Type: Series
Summary:Let the deluge began
Warnings: Language, violence

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Alana woke up with a full bladder and her head in Caine’s lap. Slowly she edged away before swinging her legs off the couch and trying to walk silently across the squeaky floorboards.
“Disgusting couch. Nasty floors. Has no one ever heard of soap?” she muttered in a sleep husky voice as she closed the bathroom door behind her. Squinting against the glare of the bulb she hovered over the toilet and let out a blissful sigh as her bladder emptied.
There was no way she was sitting on that toilet and as soon as she felt better…hold on. Why was she wearing different pajamas? And why did she smell like, she took a whiff of her arm, cotton candy?

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Vigorously scrubbing her hands she tried her best to not look in the mirror. She knew she had to look atrocious. Although, now that she thought about it, her face didn’t hurt nearly as bad as it had yesterday. She thought it might have been yesterday. Her days seemed to have blurred together.  After drying her hands on her shirt, there was no way she was drying them on the towel hanging there, glanced at herself in the mirror.

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Well, her face didn’t look that bad. As a matter of fact most of her scars seemed to have healed up. Just a faint black eye and a few scratches here and there but nothing that would be disfiguring. She blinked then blinked again. And amazingly she could see as clear as day. She hadn’t been able to see this clearly without her glasses since she was in the second grade.
“Wow, this is unbelievable,” she muttered underneath of her breath as she turned to leave. She froze in her tracks and her mouth went dry.
She must be seeing things. She had to be.
Slowly turning back around she stared at her reflection. With a trembling hand she reached up and touched her hair.

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Her scream was loud enough to wake the dead.

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Caine’s feet hit the floor and he was running before he was even fully awake. He came to a halt outside the bathroom door and banged on it hard enough to cause the door to shudder.
“Alana! Are you okay? Answer me!”
Her scream stopped as suddenly as it started.
“I’m fine!” Her voice trembled and he could hear her sniffle.
“You’re not fine! What’s going on? I’m coming in!”
Reaching down he grabbed the door handle and twisted it only to feel the door slam shut again.

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“You can’t come in here!” Alana yelled as she held the door closed with her body. Frantically she looked around for something to hold it closed. No one was ever going to be able to see her again. Not until she fixed her hair. And just what had happened to her hair? When she fell asleep every hair had still been in place. At least she thought every hair had been in place. Ugh! She hated the hazy memories.
“Alana?” The door moved an inch as he pressed against it.
“Caine! Don’t come in here!”
“Why not? What’s going on?”
She gnawed on her lip then let out a squeak when the door opened another inch. “Because of my hair! It looks horrible!”

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On the other side of the door Caine tilted his head. She had let out that ear piercing scream because her hair looked horrible? Shaking his head he moved back from the door and it slammed shut in his face.
“I don’t understand it.” Her voice was muffled by the door and what sounded like tears. “I mean, when I fell asleep my hair looked okay didn’t it? Is this because of whatever you think is going on with me? Because if it is I don’t want any part of it. I mean, I don’t want any part of it anyways but if it’s going to make my hair look like this I definitely don’t want any part of it.”
He rolled his eyes. Last night her hair had looked fine. A little lighter than it normal was but he had chalked that up to it still being wet when he put her on the couch. He hadn’t wanted to risk her waking up to blow dry her hair.
Scrubbing a hand over his face he winced at the bristles. Damn it! He had just shaved. He glanced over when the door next to him opened.

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Becca and Greg stood in the doorway. Becca tilted her head when she spotted him standing there.
“What’s all the yelling about?” she asked, her voice even huskier than usual.
“Alana’s shut herself in the bathroom and won’t come out. Something about her hair.”
“Speaking of hair…nice haircut Caine.”
Caine ran a hand through his hair sheepishly. “Yeah, I figured I needed to look a bit different.”
“Good idea.” Greg glanced at the bathroom door. “You wouldn’t, by chance, have done anything to Alana’s hair?”
“Uh…”
Becca scowled. “Of course he wouldn’t Greg. Our Alpha isn’t stupid. Tell him Caine.”
“Umm…”
“Caine?” A hint of what might have been horror crept into Becca’s voice. “You didn’t mess with any of the products in the bathroom did you? Because those all belong to Calista. That girl dyes her hair like every other day. And when she’s not dying it she’s bleaching it. So please tell me you did not put that mess on Alana’s hair.”
“Uh-”

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“What the fuck is going on? Can’t a man get any sleep around here? Jaysus Christ!”
Caine turned away from Becca’s accusing eyes to see Sean, Nolan and Calista standing behind him. Nolan looked as if he was about to fall asleep on his feet. He had briefly met Sean and Calista late last night before everyone headed out to the club. They both worked in a record store so they’d only came to the apartment to grab their equipment before heading out.
“Sorry to wake you guys. You can go back to sleep. There’s just been a small misunderstanding.”
“It’s not a misunderstanding that has a woman screaming at bloody three o’clock in the morning.”
Apparently when Sean was irritated his Irish accent became thicker, Caine thought absently.
“Dude, I had just got into that good sleep. Someone better be dying.”
“Caine?”
Caine turned back around to stare at the bathroom door. “Yeah?”
“You wouldn’t have anything to do with my hair being this way would you? I mean, I heard what Becca said and-”
Caine scratched his shoulder and cleared his throat. “I might have given you a bath and washed your hair. But my eyes were closed the whole time,” he said in a rush.
“Oh fuck me! Someone is going to die today!” Nolan said.
“Ohhh…someone’s in trouble! Someone’s in trouble!” Calista sang.
He scowled at them over his shoulder. “I don’t know-oof!”

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“Jesus Christ!” he shouted a he went flying backward. He hadn’t even heard the bathroom door open. He landed with a grunt on the small dining table. The tarot cards went flying and he heard the gun clatter to the floor. Well, that’s one good thing, he thought absently as Alana’s snarling face appeared in his vision.
“Holy hell! What the fuck happened to your hair?” He could have bitten off his own tongue as he stared in fascinated horror at the mass that was sprouting from her head. He winched when she hit in him in the side with her fist.
“I don’t know! You tell me!”
“Okay, okay! Everyone calm down! Nolan, this is not the time to be eating!”
“Dude, it’s like a fucking UFC fight here. What better time to eat?”
“What were you thinking Caine? Look at me!”
“I am looking at you. It’s nothing that can’t be fixed!”
She stared down into his face and he saw something shift behind her eyes before she kneed him in the balls.
“Motherfuckingsonofabitch!” Shoving her off of him he rolled to the other side of the table. “I was only trying to help!”

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She made an unintelligible sound before her hands curled into fist and she stomped her foot. “You know what? Just stop helping me. Every time you try to help me things go from bad to worse. You’re like the plague or something. Just…stop…HELPING ME!!!!”
“Alana, I-”
“I don’t want to hear it Caine. I just…don’t.” All of the sudden she felt drained. She turned away and suddenly realized there was more people in the room.
“I’m sorry. I don’t know-” Her face crumpled and she buried it in her hands.

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Becca made a tsking sound before reaching out and wrapping and arm around her waist. “Hey! Come on! Let’s see what we can do about that hair huh?”
Greg saw Caine lift his hand as if he were going to reach out and touch Alana before his hand fell back to his side. He stared down at the table with a hopeless expression on his face.
“How about we go out on the fire escape? Get some fresh air.”
“Fine.”

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39 Comments

  1. Penelope says:

    Ohhh, I hope Greg finds him! Please let Greg find him!

    hehehehehe. Alana was looking pretty old skool Ronald McDonald over there. I feel worse for Caine though. He just wanted to help! LOL Love that guy.

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Umm…maybe? Confused

    HAHA!! OMG! She totally does!!! Where’s the Hamburgler then? Bwahaha!!! Yeah, I feel bad for her but Caine’s faces were making me sad! He really looked confused! Haha! I love him too!

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  2. Ning says:

    I am SHOCKED to see Alana’s hair. Seriously, Caine? Don’t you read the labels? That’s probably unforgivable! XD

    But I must say Caine’s looking pretty hot with his new look. ^^ And yay for Julius! He’s gonna be meeting his uncle-cousin-Caine, I hope!

    Oh, and Becca and Greg looked really really really cute sharing pjs. (*happy sigh*)

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LOL Ning!! Yeeeah! No…Caine was kinda distracted at the time he was washing her hair! LMAO!! Alana’s going to have a hard time forgiving him especially since Becca had to cut off more hair to even out the mess! Cry

    I was surprised when I went in game and got a close up shot! Woot! Caine looks hot! Hmm…as for Julius…well…I can’t say anything!

    Aren’t those PJs wonderful! I’m always scouring places for different thing. You can get them from here. Those two deserve the matching PJs! I couldn’t resist! Now I MUST catch up on your story!

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  3. QG says:

    OMG OMG i had to stop reading for like five minutes because i was crying so hard from laughing I couldn’t see anymoreXD
    I was hoping the scream would come, but it took forever, and that’s sooo funny ‘ cause she was just noticing how good she could see without her glasses *starts to falll apart again*roflol oh god and he felt his beard and has grown back already, he does look awefully jummy btw. and then Becca started questioning him, poor thing stood there stumbeling had me more in a twist XD and then Alana heard him and attacked him “but I had my eyes closed the whole time!!”Alien , and Nolan, and woehahahaha Alien oh god! i can’t take anymore! Roflol! when you would read an onset like that in a book or see it in a movie, you go like: og please do something with it and they don’t, or fuck it up, like in those stupid parodymovies. but you actually did go there! and HOW! I totaly adore you for that!! I needed a good laugh, i’m PMSsing very badly!, and had to laugh at Greg’s sage advice to poor Caine. it is funny ’cause it’s soooooooooooooo true! Twisted I liked the fact that you make it extra for lycans. hehehe. *worships the ground you walk on*

    yay for Julius, now that Greg’s on the case, surely he will be found almost in one peace. might be a lil shaky though. poor lil tough guy. or he won’t be found and all hell will break loose.. Neutral *paranoia surfaces*

    btw have I told you how cute that little bandage on gregs face is. in combination with those eyes.. adorable!

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LOL QG! I have to admit I caught myself snorting in amusement while I was writing this last night/this morning. I’m glad you enjoyed it!! Grin

    Hahaha!! You know how you’re so focused on one thing that you don’t look at the whole picture(or maybe that’s just me! Confused ) That’s what I wanted to pull off. She was focused on the how fast she was healing and not having to wear glasses anymore that it took a minute to focus on her hair! *cough* That girl is going to have grey hair soon! Caine is going to be one of those guys that have to shave like twice a day or something. Yeah, when Becca started questioning I could just hear his voice in my head and him thinking: “Oh god! What the fuck should I say? What should I SAY?”

    Nolan is made of the win! Hahaha!! Awww…hey thanks! I try to be realistic but at the same time…not? I know that makes no sense but I’m glad that it worked how I wanted it too! Grin Rule #2 applies than doesn’t it? LOL!!

    Hahaha @ your paranoia surfacing! Hmm…I have an idea in mind for that! It could work…I’ma have to see about it though!

    The bandage is getting ready to come off. Greg should be healed from the last fight…just in time for another one I’m sure! He’s going to hate to leave Becca! Cry

    Thanks for reading and commenting QG! And I’m very glad you enjoyed it!

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  4. Cheripye822 says:

    LMAO!!!
    I can just imagine! someone is going to seriously be killed… dundundun… LOL! I bet Alana screamed loud enough to wake the dead and Cotton Candy, what a wonderful scent to smell like… If you work at a carnival, LOL! Just kidding.

    I love Caine’s maleness, his confusion and I suppose intrigue over her freaking out over her hair. Brings to mind a memory of my own bad hair cut and my bf’s confusion. LOL!

    Our Alpha isn’t stupid!!! LMAO!!! and Caine looks great!

    I am laughing so hard I can’t type!!! Loved how she just flew at him, loved how everyone is in agreement that someone is going to die today!

    Nolan has the munchies leave him be! LOL! Well at least Becca was willing to help and I feel bad for Caine, he really does care about her, it is so obvious.

    Those three rules, ROFLMAO!!! it’s good I am reading this at home! I am laughing so loud!! Although never come between me and my chocolate period, Lycan or not, LOL!

    Ooh Great Cliffhanger! is it possible that Caine will want to meet his cousin is it? hmmm I cant wait!

    This was a stunning, hilarious and wonderfully written piece. Your characters literally speak and their personalities are so clear!!! BRAVO!!!
    LOL

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LOL!! Calista is an enigma. She’s a hard core party, rocker chick but she has all these fruity scented body wash and what not. What can I say? Maybe Caine just wanted to take a nibble? Wink

    Oh god! He was so confused. In my head I could just hear him going what the hell man? I don’t get it! And then when he saw it? I wanted to smack him on the forehead for blurting that out loud! Idiot! Thanks Cherie! I didn’t want to completely make it over…at least not yet! Maybe in a few years? Hahaha!

    Yeah! That part cracked me up when I was planning it! I could just imagine them placing bets as to the outcome! Bwahaha!! Nolan is hilarious and Becca really did try to help. It is obvious but Alana just isn’t feeling that right now.

    Bwahaha!! Oh gosh! I’m glad you’re reading this at home as well! I wouldn’t want to get you in trouble! Shock

    Thanks so much Cherie! I really appreciate at you taking the time to read and comment!

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  5. Sinclair says:

    Yeaa……cant say i feel to bad for Caine. Why on earth you would touch anything in someone elses bathroom that didnt say shampoo on it is beyond me. Common sense dude. Seriously. Boy needs a clue. No take that back. He needs several and a how to on not making dumb mistakes lol. But at least he was trying. Still doesnt excuse that…animal on her head haha

    And he is sooooooooooooooo much hotter without that beard. And the stubble is lovely. Who knew his butt was so nice! That last shot shows pure bubble booty.

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    OMG Sinclair!! Haha! You don’t feel a little sorry for the man? I mean he’s utterly clueless when it comes to some things. Alana being one of them. Oh my god!! OMG!! Hahaha!! You made me snort my drink out my nose! Animal on her head? Awesome!!! Maybe that’s what she saw as well!!

    Wait…you made me have to scroll back up to check out his butt. *tilting head to better eye pixels* Okay…yeah! Caine does have an awesome butt! I total forgot what Caine looked liked without the beard. When I made him in CAS that’s how I made him and kept him! He does look nice! I think his eyes stand out more.

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  6. frhsims says:

    LMAOOOOO! I knew she would go She -Ra on him! Po’ thang, he was just trying to be nice, but still… LOL

    * scurries over to RG to stalk wait for RG Grin

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LMAO!! Of COURSE she was going to. Caine being so blase about the whole thing probably ticked her off even more! LOL!!! Yeah, I feel bad for him. Poor fella!

    Umm…scurry back over this way! The game crashed on me so I have to rebuild the half that I finished so RG won’t be updated for awhile yet. Maybe on Friday/Saturday morning. Besides, you can always tell when I’m about to put out a new chapter by the header! I ALWAYS change the header for each chapter! Razz

    *Scurries back in game*

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  7. Marie says:

    First off, Alana’s hair: omg!

    Secondly, I absolutely cracked up at the tarot cards “flying” off the table. I know that it was the best you could do but considering that were all still in their order and in a pile absolutely cracked me up. Thanks for making me laugh today; I needed it.

    Thirdly, you gotta love a Caine who can be concerned for the son of the man who is hunting him.

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    I know, I know! Ugh! Crazy hair! That’s what mine used to look like if I just let it air dry and then flew asleep! Pretty much what Caine did to Alana! LOL!

    I spent about thirty minutes looking through my clutter(I have a crap ton of clutter!) before snagging some cards! YAY I thought only to realize no, those aren’t tarot cards!! Frick! So yep, that’s the best I could do otherwise I would have went on another CC hunting spree! Rolls Eyes That’s the LAST thing I need to do! Haha!

    Caine only wants to take Ethan down…and he knows what it’s like to be ten years old and lost. Cry

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  8. Van says:

    Ohhh man. I’m gone for one day, and you and Pen both update.

    Alana’s hair Shock If I woke up with that hair, I’d be pretty pissed too. I guess you can’t really blame Caine, though–I mean, how many guys actually think to read the labels on hair products? It’s just not in the male nature. Plus he knows nothing about women anyway (I kind of half-expected Greg to give him the sex talk on the roof there).

    Well, at least they know Julian’s missing. If anyone can find that kid, it’s Greg and Caine Smile

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Haha! How was graduation Van?

    Oh MAN! I know! Poor thing! I’m just shoving her in all types of situations! LOL! Exactly! They’re like it’s there! I’ll use it! LOL!! Yeah…Caine would have stopped him REALLY quickly if he started with the sex talk!

    Hopefully one of them does find him. And not someone with other motives.

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    Van Reply:

    It was really fun. I almost didn’t go actually, because I didn’t have a date, but then me and one of my ex-boyfriends decided to go together (we have a rather Seinfeldian relationship), so yeaaah. I didn’t really have an after-grad, though, since most of my friends are actually being forced to go to school today, but there’s a party on Saturday, so we’ll just make that after-grad.

    Heheheh… that would have been hilarious. “When a mommy lycan and a daddy lycan love each other very much…” “NOOOOOOO!!!!”

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    That’s cool Van! Wow, I can’t imagine going anywhere with one of my exes(ex’s?)!

    Congrats on graduating!! That’s always a huge deal in my family for some insane reason! *shrug*

    LMAO! Yeah…*snickers* I can just see Caine’s face! Haha! Hahahaha!!!

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  9. ~Drew says:

    Oh my, that was funny. Perfect female reaction to having some MAN mess with her hair! And poor Caine, looking so dumbfounded. Oh, I love his new look. Much better with some of the hair removed, as handsome as I thought he would be.
    Love Greg’s talk with him out on the balcony, again, some stunning shots, esp. Caine doing his spiderman thing up the fire escape! Caine really is still a pup in a lot of ways.
    Really enjoying this Phoenix, love it! Look forward to more! Cool

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Thanks Karen! Haha! Yeah, I just tried to imagine…I’ve gone to the hairdresser once where she jacked up my hair and I was SO mad! Ugh!

    I just want to pinch his cheeks! Although he’d snap at me about pinching them! Haha!

    Greg’s really taken him under his wing. He realizes that Caine really hasn’t had much freedom and he doesn’t really know what’s what yet! That action was climbing up the crows nest from the BV posebox! I had to get it just right. Otherwise he was slightly to the right! Haha!

    Thanks Karen! I really appreciate it since I’ve having so much fun with this story! Grin

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  10. S.B. says:

    OMG I am laughing and screaming but ok it’s just HAIR. Rip it off and it comes back. Caine’s constant concern about Alana is incredible. And might get really annoying eventually but at this point it’s sexy and wonderful.

    Greg…yeah that might have gone wrong but I guess it worked out.

    Incredible shots and extraordinarily great writing!

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LOL!!! Yeah…but you know Alana has to have EVERYTHING in it’s place! That’s what really set her off. She was just minding her own business and now everything is upset down!

    As a Lycan Caine is always going to be worried about her. Hopefully she can get him to tone it down…maybe! Possibly! Probably! LOL

    Greg is something else. With him having to leave Caine is going to have to be on his guard. Although I’m sure someone else will want to have his back. He’s just not used to that.

    Thanks Beth! These pics actually took me a good two hours to get! Blah! The writing was the easy part! Smile

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  11. Gayl says:

    LOL! Poor Caine, he will never do the right thing where Alana is concerned will he…I think it is so cute the way he is coming to terms with his connection to her. Now if only Alana would. And he was trying to be such a good Alpha male…

    Amazing work with the shots and poses. I loved the idea of kicking the puddles and drawing it back to his father.

    So…wonder what will happen with Julius? Probably a lot more trouble for him before he gets “rescued”.

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Poor pup! No, he won’t! Not until he actually ASKS if she needs anything! Of course then he wouldn’t be Caine would he? Wink

    Thanks Gayl! Tried not to use too many poses. I love kicking up puddles and so does Caine. I caught him doing it after I moved them to a different lot and didn’t have free will turned off! And I can see Bernard kicking up puddles as well!

    Hmm…I don’t know! I have one more thing in store for him and then…we shall see! Razz

    Thanks for reading and commenting!

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  12. Freestar says:

    What a looooong wait to see the results of Caine’s “help”. But oh, it was so worth it. I loved this chapter. The realism is so there, cause I have had my share of bad hair episodes…and the feelings are so there. Becca gets her feelings completely..I am so happy she was there to help. Keep up the good work sis! I’m lovin it!!! I can’t wait to see what kind of hair style you fix her up with.

    And by the way…..Caine is seeeexxxxy!!!!

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LOL! No you didn’t! It wasn’t that long! Okay, maybe it was but I had to get some other stuff out the way first! I can’t just focus on Alana and Caine you know! No matter how much I love them! LOL Oh god! I KNOW you have had your bad hair experience!! LMAO! LOL!!! Hahahahaha!! Yeah, black hair is just not made for some of the story ours went through is it! Especially *snickers* yours! Okay, okay! I’ll stop sis!

    Like I told you…I hadn’t realized how cute he was! I loved your reaction on the phone though! That was great! Thanks so much for…well…everything! Alien

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  13. meralgia says:

    hahahaha! O, dear! Shock I hope Becca will menage to save Alana’s hair (or atleast what is left of it). That hair would piss off a much calmer person than Alana. Caine should’ve known better! Greg should better teach him a few things, otherwise he might not live very long LOL I can’t wait to see what will Alana do to poor Caine in the chapters to come, that should bring a lot of fun for us, and a lot of pain for him. LOL
    And matching PJs were such an adorable detail. Aww! I’m so warming up to those two. Wink

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    meralgia Reply:

    Oh, and I forgot to say that Caine looks even better after the makeover. He’s such a little bastard, why didn’t he dye his hair orange? haha Alien Alien

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Yeah! Caine jacked her hair up! Becca should be able to help her…Becca’s hair is awesome so hopefully…we shall see! Razz Caine is new to this whole mate thing and a male Lycan’s first instinct is to provide for his mate. Poor kiddo! LMAO!! Yeah! You are so right! He won’t live long at all!!

    Alana is a fighter for sure. She just hasn’t realized that yet! I’m throwing so much at her. I’m surprised she even gets out of bed! Confused

    LOVE the matching PJs!!! I love them already! Haha!!

    Caine is so hot! All he did with his was hack away at it and plop some gunk on it that he found in the bathroom. He doesn’t really care about how he looks. Although Caine with orange hair might not be THAT bad! LOL

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  14. Emily says:

    Awww, don’t go bonkers Alana, he was just tryin to help! LOL. Her reponse was about expected though really, she hates admiting that Caine ever does anything good, doesn’t she?

    Oh and he’s looking mighty fine with that new cut and shave! LOL

    Love the rules about women, might have to pick myself back up off the floor after those! Ha ha, never come between a woman and chocolate…period! LOL.

    Great chapter, I just love all these characters you’ve created, they are so awesome!

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LOL!! She can’t help..and neither can he. Those two are a pair! Yeah, she does. She’s all kinds of confused right now.

    Hahaha! Thanks Emily! I like the way he’s looking as well! Grin

    LMAO!!! I know right?!!!

    Thanks Emily! I enjoy visiting these characters! They crack me up! LOL

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  15. Emily says:

    Oh yeah, I do hope that Greg or someone finds poor little Julius soon, I almost forgot about him I was so excited about Caine and Alana going at it! That was just so great! Alien

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LOL!! Umm…Julius…I haven’t decided yet!! Shock

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  16. sandybvv says:

    hahahahaha oh my!! poor Alana!!!!
    that carrot-ish color on her hair doesn’t suit her at all… !!!
    Poor Caine… he is that stupid!!! only Caine would have thought about messing with Alana’s hair while she was sleeping!!! lol Oh Caine you are a child deep inside!!!

    I really love how you mix drama and humor and action all in one!! wonderful update!!!

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Hahaha!! I know right? Poor thing! Not at all! He is so stupid! But he’s not used to be around other people. And she is his mate so he’s trying to please her. He just doesn’t know how to go about it. He is a child deep inside. Remember…he didn’t have much of a childhood.

    Thanks Sandy! I really appreciate it! I try to mix RL in with the story! Razz

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  17. Mao says:

    HAHAHA! OMG! Alana’s hair, her reaction… TOO FUNNY. Poor girl. Caine, you silly fool, what did you do?! Totally not the way to a lady’s heart, y’know!

    “Three, you don’t fuck up their hair when they’re unconscious.” Couldn’t you have given him this info EARLIER Greg? LOL

    I don’t think Alana is going to be so easily forgiving of this slight. xD

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Can you imagine waking up to THAT on your head? Seriously? I think I would have taken a punch at Caine too! Gah! Even though he WAS trying to be helpful. It’s horrible!

    And Greg is probably inwardly laughing his butt off! Haha!

    Nah…can’t say I blame her though!

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  18. Valpre says:

    I loved this Phoenix, especially Caine and Alana’s interaction. I can see why she’s mad; you don’t mess with someone’s hair, especially when she’s sleeping. Hopefully she’ll cool off and see he was only trying to help. Caine may be alpha, but he still has much to learn abou women Smile and I bet Greg will help, he seems to have that scope checked and covered. I love these two men Grin

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Man, I can totally relate to this! My gram used to do my hair and she’d braid it and put relaxers and then dye it so my hair was funky for years! Hahaha! Caine’s been closed off from ‘normal’ people for so long and he’s helping isn’t what any woman would call help! Poor thing! Frown

    Greg will help him out. He knows what it’s like to be away from his family. Even though Greg’s decision is by choice it’s still painful!

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