Prompt 062

May 3, 2009 Vanderall residence. 2118 hrs

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Dom stared at herself in the mirror then slowly reached up and grabbed a clump of hair. Bringing the scissors up she inhaled deeply before the sound of scissor blades cutting hair filled the small bathroom.  It had been nearly two weeks since her baby had ran off and she was sick and tired of her heart stopping every time the phone rang. Hoping and praying it was Gregory with news of her son and yet fearing the worst. She had never been one to stand by and she wasn’t going to start now. Especially not now.
Wiping the hair from her blouse she studied herself in the mirror with a pleased expression before walking out of the bathroom and picking up the suitcase that had been waiting for her. A suitcase that should have been packed months ago.

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She didn’t even bother to look around as she headed toward the stairs. There was nothing for her here. She wouldn’t miss the big, empty apartment filled with expensive things or the man who was currently past out in his room. A room that they used to share but now she couldn’t even stomach the idea of him touching her. So much had changed in the last few weeks. And, if she were honest with herself, it was a change that was long overdue.
She had just reached the landing when she heard the creak of the bedroom door.

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“Dom, what the fuck is going on? What the hell did you do to your hair?” There was a pause then: “And where the hell do you think you’re going?” he snarled.
Dom’s hands tightened but she refused to turn around. “I’m leaving Ethan. I’m going to look for my son-”
Our son,” he snapped.
“And I’m taking him far away from you. This…thing we had is done. It’s been over for years.”
“Do you really think that I’m just going to let you walk out on me? On me?”
“You really don’t have a choice Ethan. I’m leaving and there isn’t anything you can do about it.”
There was a beat of silence behind her and then a snort. “You think so? What if I find your precious little boy first huh? Then you’ll come crawling back to me on your hands and knees…just how I like you.”

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She didn’t think. Just reacted. Her bags fell from her hands and she whirled around to see him grinning at her as if this was a joke. As if using her son as a pawn would make her stay. She was done being his bitch. Done doing his dirty work. She was just fucking done. A red haze clouded her vision and Dom didn’t even realize she had attacked him until they were rolling around on the floor, snapping and snaring at each other. She could feel his erection as it dug into her hip. Disgusted she wiggled around until she gained enough freedom to knee him in the balls. He let out a windy curse before backhanding her.
Dom edged away as she patted around on the floor for anything that could be used as a weapon. Ethan snarled as he landed heavily on top of her. His big hand grabbed the back of her neck and squeezed as he raised his other hand. This was the point where she always backed down. Where she always turned her head and averted her gaze to show him that he was the alpha.
But not this time.

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“Go ahead and do it you fucking coward. Hit me. I know you want to.  You know you want to. But heaven help you when I heal. I will kill you. Maybe it’ll be in the food you eat, or maybe I’ll kill you while you sleep but if you lay a fucking hand on me I won’t rest until you’re six feet under and I’ve spit on the top of your grave.”
She felt his hand tighten on her neck and saw his jaw tighten. But she also took notice of the confusion that flashed across his face. “What the fuck is wrong with you?”
“I want my son and I want him now. I’m tired of you doing nothing. Letting everyone else do all your dirty work. I’m tired of you. I’m just tired.” Reaching up she shoved hard against his shoulders. He rocked backwards before straightening.
“Dom-”
“No Ethan. Just…no. Good-bye.”
She didn’t look back as she grabbed her suitcase and purse and headed down the stairs.

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Ethan stood over the railing and watched as Dom headed outside. She’d be back. She had to come back. She wasn’t used to being out on the streets. Who was going to take care of her like he did? No one that’s who.  His hand fisted on the railing.
She had to come back.

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“Well, well, well. Looks as if I came just in time. It looks as if I have something you want and you have something I need. I’m Victoria. Now…let’s make a deal.”

Stretching the prompt again. Spring = change to me. I always feel refreshed and like dropping old baggage. Go with me here. Poor Nolan. I like him better as Stoney McStoner. I still want to hug him though. Thanks Dolly_riot for the use of Victoria! And man it’s been awhile since we’ve seen Ethan and Dom huh? And that hair cut fits her I think. Yeah? And Julius! YAY! I’m just saying! Good to have him out of pup form for a change!:) Added some pics to unscripted and that’s about it. New layout. Not sure if I like it enough to keep it. I have another in reserve. :P OH! Townhouse link takes you to Sim Urbania. Lot is by Mocha. There will be better shots of it soon~ish.

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32 Comments

  1. S.B. says:

    I am laughing so hard COOKIES GOT TO GET ME SOME COOKIES

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LOL!! I ♥ Julius! He’s such a sweet kid and is happy with just about everything! Seriously! ROTFL

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  2. S.B. says:

    ok how did that happen…never mind….

    between Nolan ignoring the puppy and Dom finally FINALLY taking Ethan apart, and I think he paid attention this time, I adore this!!!

    Ethan…damn what a total loss. He can’t even focus on the loss of his son except for some missing tool. I hope Dom does take him apart, and I think she can. If anyone can, she can.

    WTF is Victoria doing there?

    The way you switch between cookies and ice cream to the monstrous tension between Ethan and Dom is just incredible! Really fantastic use of emotion to whip between one, and the other. And I love the way you focus on their feet, as if it was from the puppy’s point of view.

    Wonderful wonderful update!!!!

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LOL! I don’t know how it happened either! Aaand yes, I did just switch out themes. The other was bothering me! Anyways…

    Yeah, Nolan really wasn’t feeling the puppy love this go ’round!Frown And YAY for Dom finally doing something about Ethan! FINALLY!

    Yeah, Ethan is all about Ethan. It’s sad really but I think if it someone said they’d return Julius if he stepped down he wouldn’t do it.

    Oh Victoria! She’s wants what she wants and everyone else can suck it. We’ll see how this goes!

    Thanks S.B.! I worry about stuff like that all the time! I really appreciate it and glad you enjoyed this! I’ve been waiting to bring human Julius back!Razz

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  3. Van says:

    Ethan is such a dick. I can’t wait until he dies, preferably in some unspeakably gruesome and violent fashion Grin

    Good for Dom for finally sticking up for herself! And yaaaaaay, Julius got some cookies! Yeah, I miss Stony McStoner too Frown

    Gotta wonder what Victoria’s up to… hmmm…

    Great prompt, Phoenix Grin

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Amen to that Van! LMAO!!! Well, um…yeah! I’ll have to see about that! It all depends on the pose boxes and my PSP skills!Razz

    It was about TIME! Dom could have taken Ethan down A LONG time ago but I think she was still in love with him. Or who he used to be. Cookies!! COOKIES!! I can just imagine what sorta crap Nolan was trying to feed him. Poor Nolan!Frown

    All shall be revealed! *does spooky jazz hand thing*Razz

    Thanks Van!Grin

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  4. gayl says:

    I totally get the “Spring” theme here.

    Ethan is clearly not the alpha in that relationship. Dom could definitely tear him a new one…you never NEVER question a mother’s attachment to her child. You just do not discount that. Ever.

    I just adore Julius so much. He is so busted! And Nolan is such a kick whether stoned or not!

    I wonder if Victoria is there as a setup against Ethan or if she is really going to turn on Caine…hmm…

    Fabulous update Phoenix! Chic

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    *whew* I worry about that! You have no idea gayl! hahaha!

    Oh no! No, I don’t believe he EVER was. He just had that illusion and she gave it to him. I wonder what story he’s going to come up with as to why she’s gone? And no…no you don’t. Ethan was a little too slow to realize that.

    Julius always makes me smile. He’s so clueless sometimes and other times way to grown. Nolan is! He’s pouty face was killing me! Haha!

    Oh, I think SHE thinks that if Alana is out of the way she might be able to draw Caine’s attention to her for a bit. Long enough for her to suck him dry that is. Should be interesting! Wink

    Thanks Gayl!!Grin

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  5. goodbye_sun says:

    I love Julius being so nonchalant about being busted, I guess its not like he could try and act like it didn’t happen since Nolan has not been partaking.

    Go Dom! It took her long enough, but at least it finally happened. I can’t see Ethan just letting her walk away, that’s what he has minions for, right?

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Ha! I also think it’s because Julius’ spent some time with Nolan so he knows he’s mostly bluster. Plus, he was busted!Razz

    I KNOW right!? Gah! And yeah, she’s not getting a clean break. She should know that!

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  6. Meralgia says:

    Whoa, man! It’s been A WHILE since I commented. I’ve been reading, but by the time I sit down to read I’m to tired to type a coherent sentence. (5:56am here now) Silly
    I LOVED Alana turning in one of the last chapters! I can’t wait to see Caine try to lecture her (or whatever it is that’s going to happen next with those two). And her freaking out once she fully realizes what she’s done. Ugh, that’ll be bad! And Dom left Ethan. You go girl! ROTFL That made me silly happy. Nice detail her cutting her hair off: if you want change start with the hair. Julius and Nolan are still too cute. I feel kind of bad for Nolan now, he feels so useless and not the man he think he’s supposed to be. I want to see you get him a love interest. Maybe one of the vampyres? Or that undercover lycan girl? hehe, that’d be fun times considering the pack she’s in. Man, I feel like one of those old aunts who are always seeking potential wifes/husbands for the young. Grin Oh, and I like the “on the couch” thing. Major kudos for the idea. Smile

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    No worries!Razz Oh wow!! I’ve SO done that before!

    Thanks! I thought it would be the best time. Her adreline is high and she’s all sorts of confused and not thinking clearly! Sure, throw something else in the mix! hahaha!

    Oh yeah…Caine will try to lecture her. We’ll see how that goes! And there will be a freak out!

    I KNOW! About time right? And thanks!Smile Whenever I do something new I either buy a new wig or cut off my hair too!

    Julius and Nolan! I love, LOVE those two together! But I feel bad I’m just tossing Nolan under the bus! It wasn’t completely his fault!Frown Ohhh….I do have a love interest in mind for him! You may, or may not, be correct there Meralgia! Side Frown Haha! That’s cool! I do the same thing!

    Thanks! And thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment!

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  7. Tiffany says:

    Gawsh that’s cute!
    I love that little boy. He’s so sweet. I love your stories. Keep up the great work. Smile

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Haha! Thanks!Smile I do try to slip some cuteness in!Razz Thanks so much Tiffany! I really appreciate your nice comments and the readership! I have to check out your story as well!

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  8. Emily says:

    D’awww at Julius! He’s just so, so cute! “Can you take me to see Caine now?” he says, so nonchalantly. LOL, like he hasn’t been with them the entire time, refusing to change! Grin

    Woah, you go Dom! I love their little fight scene and how you said that she wasn’t backing down this time, pure awesomeness. And duh Ethan no one does “take care” of her like you but that’s why she WON’T be back! LOL, he’s a little confused at how someone wants to be treated, isn’t he?

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    He’s the cutest! I just want to pinch his cheeks! And I love the casual way he said that! Like duh! Razz

    Dom had it going on in this update! I was kinda surprised myself! O_o And yeeeah! Ethan has some serious issues!

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  9. thelook. says:

    “Hiya Mr. Nolan. Can you take me to see Caine now?”
    “Holy fucking shit! I knew I shouldn’t have tried to give up smoking.” :
    LMAO!! Julius is like… angel cake with extra cake <3
    And Nolan… He's just Mr Dreamy ^^ Well in my dreams anyways!

    You go Dom! I love how were really getting to see that side to Dom – the one that has some sense of loyalty towards her husband but has bond of love and trust with her son.

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Hahaha!! Oh man! Your expressions and sayings KILL me!! Like seriously! I had to read that twice and giggled each time!Razz

    Nolan is Mr. Dreamy! He’d be even MOAR dreamy if he wasn’t such a stoner but meh! We can’t be perfect!Razz

    Exactly. I think she’s still in love with the idea of who she THOUGHT Ethan was. Who knows though…this could all be a mind trip and part of the master plan! Mwahahaha!!!

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    thelook. Reply:

    Well I do try Grin

    Just wish it would kill Ethan already Really Pissed

    Nolan might as well be a chocolate bar with extra extra smooth chocolate and I would be happy ROTFL

    Ethan reminds me a lot of Hunter but Hunter was actually a good person with hopes

    Dom mirrors Kiki – she’s seen pain and lived to tell the story but get to close to the family and BAM … wait that sounds like KayleeThinking Oh, crap it’s the two! lol

    *btw I read Ravensworth Generation and DIED; it’s the only legacy story I’ve read that wasn’t like ‘Okay we’ve had a baby let’s axe into bed and make another one’ Razz *

    Sorry for the extra long post; there was much to say Angel

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    LOL!!

    That would be anti-climatic!Razz I haven’t decided on that yet!

    Dude, I would SO be happy with that! Now you’ve made me want chocolate!

    Awww…that’s awesome! Thanks so much! I need to get back to RG. I miss the characters but I’m kinda stuck in the direction I want to take! Frown And I started out RG with NO idea of the direction I wanted to take anything and just let it evolve from there. I’m really glad you enjoyed it! And those comparisons give me something to think about!

    I don’t mind long comments at all! Razz Silly

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    thelook. Reply:

    Grin Take your time with RG Smile
    At least you spend your time to read our comments and write back – it’s nice knowing the author cares about what we have to say Grin
    I want chocolate too but I think I’ll wait ’til Christmas *cough* heck no *cough*

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    I think I know where I want to go! *crosses fingers*

    Of course I do! I never understood writers who don’t. It always puzzled me why authors would ignore the people who take the time our of THEIR lives to read your work. Plus reading the comments gives me ideas and motivates me! So thank YOU for leaving feedback!Smile

    Hahaha! Ditto! I went and got a McFlurry yesterday. M&M. It sucked but it was chocolate!Razz

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    thelook. Reply:

    Woop for RG Grin
    Grin I had some Christmas chocolates – ended up feeling sick but I held it in ROTFL
    How was your day?
    Yeah, I end up staying up til one or two reading people’s stories sometimes and then to see all the comments they have and they can’t be bothered to write makes me go ‘AGH SOME OF US SPEND HOURS READING THEN ANOTHER COMMENTING AND YOU DON’T WRITE BACK? Talk about nice’ Smile

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Razz I still haven’t even opened their hood!Frown For shame! My day was good! Spent it with the fam soooo…didn’t really celebrate!Frown But it was still good!

    Haha! I’ve done that! Is it bad of me to see if authors comment back before I leave a comment? O_o I don’t get that either but if the story is good I keep going back. Just in lurk mode!Wink

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  10. Mao says:

    “Holy fucking shit! I knew I shouldn’t have tried to give up smoking.” LOLOLOL

    Oh hell yes, time to GTFO Dom. And now there’s Victoria. See, I knew this was going to get bad. Shit always gets bad when you get fangs involved. Yikes.

    I hope Caine knows well enough to watch his back!

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    That was SO Nolan! I couldn’t NOT write it! Haha!

    I KNOW! I was so happy when I thinking of ways to do this prompt and her leaving popped into my head! YAY! No doubt right? Gah! But I always had this planned with Victoria! She’s just so…just so fangy! LOL!!

    Caine knows it. Hopefully he knows it.

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  11. s@ndy says:

    fantastic….
    the part with Dom and Ethan is wonderfully done…
    I really hope Dom will be the one to bring Ethan to Caine…. she really does deserve that chance, after all, her life has been a living hell with him… he really doesnt even care at all for his child… nor he will ever care at all for Dom… he is just a selfish jerk … I wonder what kind of ‘deal’ will Ethan and Victoria make….

    Sorry for the delay… but I’m back to business again… and Lycan Tales is my first stop!!! Grin hurray… Razz ROTFL

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Welcome back Sandy!Grin

    Thank you! Those two are easy for me to write. All that anger and whatnot I guess!Razz

    Oh, well now that’s interesting! I never even thought of that! Oh man! That would have Ethan LIVID beyond belief! As for the deal with Ethan and Victoria…that’s in the works! Wink

    Awww! Thanks Sandy! I can’t wait until you start writing again!

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  12. Sinclair says:

    Yayyyyyyy Dom! Bout dam time. I knew she had bigger balls than Ethan. I wish she had it in her. I wouldnt mind seeing her and Alana go at it.

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  13. PhoenixFG says:

    I know man! Gah! I was getting tired of her. SHE should have been the alpha instead of Ethan. She pretty much was though. And Alan and Dom may still go at it. Just saying…

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  14. Freestar says:

    Fantastic update. Nolan is so sweet, I really think he should be let out of the dog house now. It wasn’t entirely his fault.

    Julius is just too cute for words.

    I am so proud of Dom. It took her long enough. And you know her hair rocks right. Loooove it!!

    I knew I didn’t like Victoria. I knew she was trouble. We should just kill her now before anything even gets started.

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    PhoenixFG Reply:

    Thanks!Grin He is a sweetie! And don’t worry! he won’t stay in for long…ish! Haha!

    Julius us a trip isn’t he? I ♥ him!

    I am too! About time! I wanted to slap her! And yeah, I thought you’d like that hair!Razz

    LMAO!! LOL!!! Yeah…no! We can’t do that!

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