Comments on: Prompt 060

By: PhoenixFG

PhoenixFG — Sun, 03 Jan 2010 05:55:22 +0000

Thanks Mao! And you got it. The wolf is laying just below the surface. It doesn’t take much for it come out.

Thanks! I had a time with those shots. Rooftops are NOT great for OMSP!

By: Mao

Mao — Sat, 02 Jan 2010 17:31:45 +0000

Ooh, oooh! I’m loving the duality of the werewolves here. Their human sides and wolf sides each have their places. I’m sure the wolf side always takes precedence, but being doctors and whatever else… very cool.

Loved the shots of Dominica running out of the building! I’m assuming they found something about Caine?

By: Phoenix

Phoenix — Sun, 08 Mar 2009 02:51:00 +0000

I don’t know! That girl just cracks me up! I can’t help but write it that way! And I’m sure she’s freaking traumatize by the whole thing…but especially the germs!

She is in for some danger. But I think Alana can handle it…she just has to dig deep! *PLEASE let Alana handle it!* LOL!

Thanks Gayl!

By: Gayl

Gayl — Sun, 08 Mar 2009 00:04:00 +0000

Why oh why are all of Alana's adventures so funny? I'm sure she doesn't feel that way however. That entire scene in the hospital was hilarious.

The bad thing is that she is in for some danger I think. Alana has no idea what is in store for her. I am fascinated to see what they discovered in her blood! My guess is some link to Caine but you never know...

Well done Phoenix!

By: Phoenix

Phoenix — Sat, 07 Mar 2009 20:22:00 +0000

Thanks Karen!

Yes, it is a complication. Poor Alana, all she wanted was to get in and get out.

I figured they’d blend in with society. You never know if the person you’re talking to is what she/he appears!

I’m glad you’re liking this so far Karen!

By: Phoenix

Phoenix — Sat, 07 Mar 2009 20:21:00 +0000

Oh boy! Don’t I know it goodbye_sun! Although you never know yourself until your put in a touch spot! She might surprise herself!
Thanks for reading!

By: ~Drew

~Drew — Sat, 07 Mar 2009 16:18:00 +0000

Interesting turn of events, love all the destinations racing through her head that she has never been, nice touch!
Well, this complicates things for sure, is she turning, or just has the blood on her now?
Nice twist with the Doctors being Lycans, well written, enjoyable, look forward to more!

By: goodbye_sun

goodbye_sun — Sat, 07 Mar 2009 08:53:00 +0000

Oh dear, I’m not so sure Alana was made for any sort of adventures that this might be leading towards…

By: Phoenix

Phoenix — Sat, 07 Mar 2009 03:40:00 +0000

LOL!! They ALL do that! I wanted some running poses were she looked kinda serious but nooo…haha!! It's so cute!

Thanks Emily! That's the Hula&More hack for that one! The dying by illness! An oldie but a goodie!

Awww…thanks Emily! I have the next three updates pictured out. Just have to write them! Glad I'm not being annoying with how fast these come out!

By: Emily

Emily — Fri, 06 Mar 2009 22:01:00 +0000

I LOVE the cute wolfies as they are running with their tongues hanging out! So adorable!

Anyway, this part was so humorous, all her fear of the germs and the panicked intern! LOL. Love that sequence where she is falling down on the floor, you always pick the best poses!

And uh oh, whatever they found out about her blood isn’t good! So glad you are banging these out, I love this story!